Status Updates From The Bedroom Coach Agreement...

What is with authors repeated use of “deep breaths of air”? Seems self explanatory to me. Are people known to take deep breaths of water or something?

The cam boy story is the same level of crazy idea than those of the other books. But at least there are a bunch of new and interesting characters here, so this time it seems to work.

“What if this is a mistake?” he asked in his low, quiet voice. I finally gained control over my arms, so I slid them forward and rested my hands on the sides of Dayton’s torso. My fingers closed over the seam of his shirt and I tugged him gently closer, feeling the hardness of his muscles against my lithe torso. Licking my lips, I found the last words I was able to speak. “Better make it a good one.”

Dayton got into the car on the other side, comfortable with the great
amount of legroom where we sat in the back. He spread his legs and I felt
naughty enough to glance. The logic was that if the pants were fitted well
enough to emphasize the curve of his butt, there had to be more to look at.


My first M/M.
So far so good.