Status Updates From Death Trap (Robot Wars, #1)

Um, your legs not working doesn't turn you into an ugly monster. Tyce has some self esteem issues.

Um. Rawling said you could tell your mom not the kids on Earth. But whatever

A love interest, really?

Neutral then build up a friendship. Make it realistic. Tyce has grown up literally around just adults he's never had a friend his age/been around other kids before.

They better not be instant BFF's just cuz their both similar in age. We don't even know if for sure this kid is 14. Tyce is only seeing them.

One of the newcomers is around 14 years old, Tyce's age. This should be good

Why was a teenager brought there. The project is still in the early stages. Maybe someone they needed to bring on said they'd only go if their kid came too?

Book 2

Book 1 end

Director Steven is stubborn. Dude, this could save lives but you won't even try it cuz if people find out you lied you'll look bad.

Or the ball bearings worn out cuz sand.