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It's like it's trying to be little women, but it's trying too hard. (I mean. Like. Regency little women.) The narration style is 3rd person all over the place where we see one person worried for the next person, but then the next sentence is in a different person's perspective (you've definitely seen it before. It flips and flops like a fish out of water.
I'm *trying,* my dudes. I'm *trying.*

*stares at pages* Like. It's not the *worst* thing I've ever read, but, like, this is a bit of a struggle.