Status Updates From The Return

The first ~40 pages were tortuous, and while the rest still has lots of issues and is occasionally annoying, the other ~50 pages weren't that bad.

But Jesus Christ, it is unfathomable to me how a story can reach the 40 page mark without having a single character with enough characterization to be even mildly interesting.

I first read this just after it came and am re-reading it now, and converting it to .prc at the same time. Fun on both counts!