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I'm going to be honest, the way this death was telegraphed and put to make the situation tense, along with the fight and the police... it was bad. It was contrived and since we never even started to care (and it was obvious the guy was put as a douche to be killed by the author) it all felt flat.

I hope the next section is better, because this part killed a lot of my excitement for this story.

I get that Anya is stressed, but my god, that is a shit way to make first impressions. In the span of less than 5 minutes, she had mocked her first ally: looks, personality, interest, intelligence, capabilities and have pretty much called him a fucking creep. Who the fucks does that? She can't like him, but the way she is presenting is so condescending and entitled is only plot armor that he is even cordial

I'm at 12% and so far, so good. Nothing noteworthy but nothing terrible, but I think part of my enjoyment of the book is Stephanie Savannah marvelous narration. I just vibe with this narrator for some reason.

Holy info dump 😳😳 but interested to see how things plan out