Status Updates From Blaze of Misery (Ember Glen...

This shouldn’t be this boring, too underwhelming for my taste

I can’t pinpoint exactly what it is but I am losing interest in the story. I think perhaps it’s the writing? There is so much repetitive internal monologues for both MCs. I am skipping long passages and getting bored. The romance is also borderline insta-love. But, I also want to know what happens to them as well….

The first few chapters were hard to get through due to the content. There is a lot of internal monologues of both MCs that do get a bit repetitive, that I find I’m skipping/skimming long paragraphs.