Status Updates From Raconteur: Slice of Life Fa...

This book is bugging the crap out of me. The sentence structure would confuse Yoda. Characters start to do one thing, and then they are finishing some other thing, never having seemed to have transitioned from one to the other. It jumps and switches with no warning or much of an explanation. This book really needed two more proof reads and a rewrite.
Maybe a single proofread could have helped.

I will give this a try. I don't require every page to have smut upon it (unless I am reading stroke material or word porn) but I do need interesting characters, at least a decently described world, and some, tiny bit of story to keep my interest.