Status Updates From Random Access Murder

I never got peter and protags relationship so i dont feel peters urge to keep protag from being tortured as much as i should besides just not wanting anybody to be tortured because i wouldnt like it

“ pause just short of forever” good line

Beating women. Ok , when you decide to just insert this in your book- know youre instantly changing the tone from pleasant to uncomfortably horrifying.

. Youre stopping at an inn for lunch , ok , this is now fantasy haha. Finally, some action!

First good line: (pp) “ 90% tedium/10% excitement) . That good for this book and thatd be generous. Or it could be true for life. I rlly feel bored today

Just skip to ch7 when u get to silicon valley

O man, this book is slog central. If it couldbe a tenth as interesting / exciting as its great title and cover instead of garnishing empty banterwith its leftist sf viewpoint