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Emily Newton
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While it makes sense for this story to be told in first person and narrated by our main character, the author’s choice of storytelling would be better suited to a third-person narration. The use of similes feels excessive and not entirely accurate for our character, creating comparisons about ideas she truthfully would know nothing about.
— Feb 09, 2026 06:03AM
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