Status Updates From The Unbalanced Equation (Ho...

Hay formas y formas de hacer el forced proximity, esta es un poco weird

ok... i wasn't expecting that #weird

Te voy a dar yo vacaciones en Tenerife puto guiri

i can’t do this shit, he’s NAWT it idk and idc. also the prose is kinda meh. not bad in a clanky/awkward way, but in a “this is just not very good because this could have been more condensed than it is now”

“But there was nothing respectable about the way I was imagining Liz in soaking wet clothes”

disgusting actually. they JUST met. she’s 23. like she’s not a kid but DUDE. i fucking hate it when men in books are like that (well irl too but can’t do shit abt it). like make her want her mind, not her body. don’t be a disgusting dog like that

“twenty-two”

a grown ass man thirsting after a 22 year old 😭 not fucking good at alllll

and it’s not the relationship that’s the problem. it’s the fact that he assessed her body already