Status Updates From A Noble Betrayal (Brotherho...

I don't know how I'm going to keep these brothers straight. My brain is already stumbling over the serial "H" names.

What’s really annoying, is that a chapter ends with a scene and the next chapter doesn’t continue there, but fast forwards several hours or days. You are left wondering what happened, and don’t always find out right away.

Not much going on, but this scene is ridiculous:
'let me tell you, wife, what to expect from me. I do intend to use my tongue”—she made a face—“to entice you to consummate our marriage this eve.'