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Sophia
is on page 557 of 624
All the characters took stupid pills for act 3
— Jan 13, 2026 09:49AM
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Sophia
is on page 327 of 624
just when i thought i was out they pull me back in
I know my last update was me complaining about the number of povs in this book but the one-off povs from random civilians in this world are really good
— Jan 09, 2026 01:14PM
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I know my last update was me complaining about the number of povs in this book but the one-off povs from random civilians in this world are really good
Sophia
is 25% done
Remember when I said I was gonna finish this before the end of 2025. Lol.
Thoughts so far--this book is Messy. The prose is sloppy with multiple (multiple!) run-on sentences over 50 words. The cast is bloated. I'm not sure they all needed POV chapters but maybe it'll pay off in the back 75%.
I think this series could really have benefited from a stricter developmental editor...
— Jan 08, 2026 12:56PM
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Thoughts so far--this book is Messy. The prose is sloppy with multiple (multiple!) run-on sentences over 50 words. The cast is bloated. I'm not sure they all needed POV chapters but maybe it'll pay off in the back 75%.
I think this series could really have benefited from a stricter developmental editor...












