Status Updates From Brick (Fire Lake, #1)

Please, someone get the author a proofreader!
Breaks/brakes, off/of, and excepted/accepted were some of the errors that set my teeth on edge.

'a young single mother would be the person Sophia wanted to have her clothing' 'Julia seemed surprised but thankful'

I'm not sure how old great aunt Sophia was, I mean she was capable of chiselling under a rock so maybe not as old as I'm imagining, but Julia is twenty one. Yeah, I get her being surprised at the offer of the clothes!

Er handy he picked his wallet up after exiting the shower then.

These brave, tough, traumatised navy SEALS may 'know how evil works' but they make shit bodyguards

'would you say we're dating?'
'we'd better be more than dating' Brick replied while motioning between them 'this is a committed monogamous relationship'

They've had maybe one conversation before now and this is morning after talk. And I'm still giggling about how that came about!
Also who talks like this? Especially pre-coffee.

'..grabbed hold of Roman's track pants....and pulled them off his object of desire'