Status Updates From Coldburgh Train Station (RI...

// I really got sick and tired when the authors kept abusing the sentence “I hope he knew how much I cared for him or I hope he knew how much I wanted him … I hope you know this or that”! Shut the fuck up already, stop hoping that he knows some thing and just fucking tell him!!
This was one more really obnoxious thing that the authors did!!

// They absolutely mean well and in a fictional world they have nothing to worry about but still!!

// I do have to add as a sidenote that it irritates me that these authors perpetuate the whole tanning nonsense!! Tanning is probably one of the leading causes of skin cancer and is so incredibly dangerous, and as far as I’m concerned should be absolutely abolished! The authors must notice and so perpetuating something like that is disgusting and ignorant and just plain fucking irritating!! STOP!!

// Rory, you better fucking gravel in profuse apology to your brother!!!

// Rory, you’re a fucking piece of garbage! You believe in ghosts but you didn’t believe in your brother and a lot of what just happened is absolutely your fault, and that garbage pussy apology is the best you could do?! You’re trash right now!!

// Stupidity and incompetence trigger me into major irritation and there is a lot of that in this book!!

// I am pissed off at the authors because they destroyed a character, they destroyed the book and the story, and they fucked it all up!! This book had all the makings of being a success and the authors, with really fucking stupid decisions, decimated and destroyed everything!!

// Now I’m just very angry at the complete ignorance and stupidity of Rory and the disgust I’m feeling in regards to that character!! I have absolutely zero desire to read anything more about him and will probably not get the next book because of it!!

// The authors genuinely took an incredibly promising book and turned it into a fucking shit show! It’s absolutely horrifying that these authors are destroying their own book and what could’ve been a fantastic story!! The only thing these authors are accomplishing right now is fucking pissing the fuck out of all the smart/intelligent readers!!!

// Rory has major “too fucking stupid to live” vibes!!

// I don’t get what the authors are doing right now because one clearly made a very bad mistake in the turn this took & the other one is simply exacerbating it!! How Brooks isn’t getting fucking pissed off right now & isn’t telling Rory off feels absolutely completely ludicrous to me, and the fact that these authors are allowing characters to pander + cater to this garbage behaviour pisses the fuck out of me!!!

// Brooks really needs to fucking lay into Rory and put him in his fucking place and slap the fucking crap out of him!! He needs to boot Rory out of his self indulgent entitled bullshit! Rory is so used to being number one in Brooks’s life and acts like it’s all about him, and Brooks really needs to make it clear that Rory is the one betraying him right now for being such an ungrateful little fucking shit!!

// For someone who wants to be within this world of the paranormal and someone who supposedly does so much research, you really are an ungrateful, ill prepared, ignorant fucking asshole, Rory 😡😡😡😡😡!!

// AboutAlex, that kid should’ve just run into the street and got hit! It sounds horrible, but if you think about it, that stupid fucking kid is an idiot for running into the street, and the parents are absolutely and completely to blame for letting that happen, so it’s the parents that should’ve paid the price!! And for anyone who says that a child supersedes an adult, fuck you, Alex is someone’s baby too!!!

// I’m fucking pissed at the authors for turning Rory into an insufferable jackass at this particular moment!! Why would you fail your own character and why would you go out of your way to fucking destroy him!?! It’s fucking stupid and makes zero sense whatsoever!! Authors, do fucking better!!

// I am very angry with the authors for turning Rory into an insufferable jackass at this specific moment!!

// There is a distinct lack of development in terms of the characters and there is quite a bit of contradiction in terms of how one character is versus what we are told about him, and I feel like at this stage the authors really let the story run away from them and because they needed to accomplish something in the plot in one sense, they destroyed elements in other ways!!

// Now the authors are starting to fucking piss me off because they are taking it too far!! I get that there needs to be a little bit of conflict but they are genuinely and legitimately destroying a character [Rory] right in front of my very eyes!! We are told that Rory is a sweetheart and an absolute ray of sunshine, which can be true, but right now I am seeing him being an ungrateful obnoxious fucking brat!!

// For someone that initially was one of the only two that believed in what he believed, the fact that Rory is being so disrespectful about everything that the other guys have experienced really makes me very very very irritated with him! Rory is an absolute sweetheart and he has a heart of gold, absolutely, and he does everything with absolute innocence, but he’s still a bit irritating in this specific instance!!!

// I kind of want to slap Rory 😡!!

Otherwise this is a fantastic and incredibly engaging book!!

Alright, no. “Sweet boy I’d lost”?? Guy was the same age as you. He died a year ago?? That’s how you’d describe losing a kid. Or watching someone you know much younger than you go through something traumatic that changes them.

This is what Dane’s Mum probably thinks when she remembers the kid her boy used to be before his BF died.

I hate this.

No you don’t! Jesus, I’m starting to hate Dane. Brooks, please just go hang out with your lesbian friend Lisa.

Yes. Please continue to give the guy who adores you mixed signals even after you’ve explained to him you can’t have a relationship with him.

Shocking. I am shocked. 🙄

Imagine if you’d been honest? Then you wouldn’t have heart the really sweet guy who likes you a lot.

Here’s the thing, when you tiptoe around past trauma for so long, constantly hinting but never saying, it turns out nine times out of ten to not be nearly as traumatic as you expect. And that’s deeply aggravating. Just tell us so we can move on and not be disappointed but the underwhelming reveal.

How fucking idiot are these morons, they find new levels of imbecile on every page

Okay I know I have weird dreams, but I had a dream that Dane got fucked by a ghost and honestly that would improve the book so much