Status Updates From Bloody Wishes

Too much smut but am not complaining and am wondering what the war is so am sticking to the end, I don’t like the human and it’s weird for me but I really don’t like people who up and leave and come back after two years because they are dying claiming he wanted to confess his love before he died and when he didn’t die, he still hasn’t confessed plus he is taking all the attention 🤦🏽‍♀️

Between all these peeps there are so very many relationship dynamics. Like, so many. Will I make it through them all to reach the end???

Seriously, I'd beta read no problems. Writhing not withering

This desperately needs a real edit. Awkward sentences, several missing commas, incorrect words

Pacing is off and I volunteer to beta read the next one