Status Updates From The Spear Cuts Through Water

Ok , so the prose is beautiful. But. But.

There's like, nothing happening i mean things are happening but they feel inconsequential , and I am so confused . Who even is the protagonist?

Se mai ci faranno un film, voglio Timothée Chalamet nel cast. Preferibilmente a recitare nel teatro.

Little hard to get into for someone whose first language isn’t English. Hard to keep track of the timeline. Worldbuilding is quite nice.

Little hard to get into for someone whose first language isn’t English. Hard to keep track of the timeline. Worldbuilding is quite nice.

Slow Start, kind of hard to get into for some whose first language isn’t English. Somewhat difficult to keep track on the Timeline.