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Gianna
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 91 of 156
"The planet was already turning away from its sun, so they’d need to look for whatever they had to look at night."
....what?
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 89 of 156
"She wanted to say she was sorry for making him move his hand away from her, but she wasn’t sure how to word it."
Clearly the author also doesn't know how to word it, because this is SUCH an awkward sentence
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 71 of 156
A scene that should have been emotional and heart wrenching is cold and flat.
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 69 of 156
This dialogue is SO awkward.
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 64 of 156
I really don't like Jasper. He's an asshole.
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 61 of 156
"...she didn’t really trust him, which was very unfair."
Oh my God, he's so entitled!
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 56 of 156
So Jasper has never been interested in girls before but immediately falls for Alana. Sure. Right.
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 49 of 156
Oh, Jasper has "read all about" the dragons, has he? Good lord, he's an arrogant asshole.
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Esther Jones
Esther Jones is on page 19 of 156
I already hate Jasper. He's an asshole who thinks he's a good guy. Ugh.
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Carrie
Carrie is on page 11 of 154
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Dana
Dana is finished
DNF at 30%.

I'm sure that if this was polished more and expanded, I'd be way more into it than I am. The language was clunky
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