Status Updates From The Complete Gary Lutz

I find this style so startlingly, thoroughgoingly unpleasant to read that I am beginning to understand some of the etiology of what I loathe in contemporary American writing so thank you to Garielle Lutz for that x

boring but riveting.

Techniques for cliche avoidance
the sentences are as satisfying as a good gargle. They do things sentences rarely do.

Lutz is a new discovery for me. Now, Lutz is a real prose artist.