Status Updates From The Book of Secrets

The book's still great so far! I like the conflict between Boy and Lexi :D

I LOVE this book! Especially the part where they had to change the whole script and ended up making a racket of everything instead! But there was that one time where a phrase was repeated in the same sentence. I just wanted to cut the repeated phrase out. But I still love the story so far! :D

The book's prose definitely left much to be desired, especially at the beginning of the book, when I just got information on Boy's name from absolutely nowhere. But it did improve as it progressed. It did more telling than showing, but uh... Children can pick up on stuff just from the dialogue, too, you know, Phillip? Anyway, it was still a funny read with a great story, just that the presentation could be better. :)