Status Updates From Somebody's Crying

Another grammatical error. Too instead of to. My pet hates are coming out in this book and it’s almost enough for me to DNF but the story is too intriguing. It better be worth it

Arghh Tom. You seem really psychotic. You don’t love Alice. You are in lust. Also you think she’s her mother so that’s gross.

A grammatical error. A very simple but annoying one. You’re instead of Your. How did this get past the editing process?

And a flippant rape comment?! I have to keep reminding myself this was printed in 2008…but damn. I would have DNFd already but it’s a compelling read

Oh awesome - fat shaming 16 year old girls for having rolls which isn’t real fat…great (sarcasm)

Wow the fat-phobia! 2008 - what a time!