Status Updates From The Case of the Missing Cut...

"'When the bears go,' Aunt Becky said with controlled anger, 'the mountains will fall.' She could not adjust to raped forests. Aunt Becky's shoulders slumped, and Spinner took her arm." (140) was the second from the last sentence supposed to be in the quotes or is that just an observation by the omniscient narrator?

"Spinner turned, put the line over her shoulder, and, slavelike, hauled it up the bar." (9) oh NO 1975