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Melenia
Melenia is 10% done
Just started this audiobook.
— Mar 28, 2023 03:32PM Add a comment
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Josh
Josh is 10% done
This writing style is so passive. The author missed so many opportunities to 'show not tell'... So so so many pages of poorly written interactions. Jeez, what a waste of time. The story did seem interesting though! I'm sure it's not easy, but hope the author will work on his style a bit for next book.
— Aug 27, 2021 08:05AM Add a comment
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Josh
Josh is 10% done
Holy fuck is just page after page of exposition!

This is very obviously an amateur writer, so I'll stick with it a bit more.
— Aug 27, 2021 04:13AM Add a comment
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