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Jessica Leigh
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So I noticed a big error. In one part at the beginning. Like four pages in. The main character is talking about her bird. And in the same sentence refers to it as a she than a he than a she again. Next paragraph refers to it as a he again. So is it a she or a he?
— Jan 04, 2024 06:58AM
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Jamie
is finished
Is Whammy a boy or girl??? Only a few pages in and already noticed editing errors. Kind of funny really. "kept her wings clipped, few years I had him, she became dependent". All in one paragraph!!"
Not bad, really really easy read, took no time at all to get through it.
— Sep 16, 2019 12:36PM
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Not bad, really really easy read, took no time at all to get through it.
Jamie
is 7% done
Is Whammy a boy or girl??? Only a few pages in and already noticed editing errors. Kind of funny really. "kept her wings clipped, few years I had him, she became dependent". All in one paragraph!!
— Sep 16, 2019 06:43AM
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