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Ellis
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Vagueness is laziness, not creating a magical atmosphere. Do the work and provide some solid time references. We can be grounded in 1921 (or whenever) and still sense the magic of the story (or whatever). May abandon...
— Jun 12, 2020 10:23PM
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Ellis
is on page 50 of 320
Dear editors of this book:
I think I like the story, after 40 pages; however, this novel commits the heinous crime of semicolon abuse, as nearly every. single. paragraph. has at least one semicolon.
This is distracting; I am distressed by this flagrancy; make it stop.
— May 15, 2020 10:46PM
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I think I like the story, after 40 pages; however, this novel commits the heinous crime of semicolon abuse, as nearly every. single. paragraph. has at least one semicolon.
This is distracting; I am distressed by this flagrancy; make it stop.
Ellis
is on page 32 of 320
Aside from a few proofreading errors/interesting punctuation choices, it’s...interesting. I can’t tell if it feels magical or just stilted. But I will admit I’m intrigued.
— May 14, 2020 05:52PM
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