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Si Clarke is 21% done

The writing is good. The story is interesting. The editing leaves something to be desired. But now we can add transphobia and homophobia to the racism, misogyny, and ableism.

— Apr 01, 2022 03:20AM Add a comment

Si Clarke is 18% done

— Mar 31, 2022 02:10PM Add a comment

Si Clarke is 12% done

This really needed a sensitivity reader (or probably several). So far we’ve got a slang-talking, ganja-smoking Rastafarian, the R-word, and stinky curry jokes.

Interesting story. Decent writing. Problematic.

— Mar 31, 2022 01:41PM Add a comment

Si Clarke is 8% done

— Mar 30, 2022 02:03PM Add a comment