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I’ve read about 85% of this book and hard-put to finish it. I’ve never read so much exposition in a novel in my life. Isn’t “show don’t tell” rule #1 of fiction writing. Barfoot tells everything throughout this book. The characters are so flat as to be nearly indistinguishable from each other. I think I’m deliberately not going to finish it out of spite.
— Oct 14, 2024 01:44PM
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