Status Updates From Wrath (Seven Deadlies MC, #1)

looks good and smutty hahaha

Really far fetched story. Started off with hostage and torture situation which ended up really having no more relevance on the rest of the book. After being taken by an MC club, used and abused by several men Ryan’s carries on as if nothing happened and jumps on the next guy she meets.

Really far fetched story. Started off with hostage and torture situation which ended up really having no more relevance on the rest of the book. After being taken by an MC club, used and abused by several men Ryan’s carries on as if nothing happened and jumps on the next guy she meets.

One more thing... when two characters are speaking there is no separation between their dialogue within the same paragraph. In order to follow who is speaking you gave to pay attention to the quotation marks. It is annoying and distracting.

two characters with the same name.
Ryder Dixon, AKA Fury
Rider, a club brother. Confusing...

Another thing tgat bugs me is tgat the narration changes between characters randomly in the same chapter. Each paragraph or so and there is no warning or labeling. I have has to double check how is actually speaking a few times. Its frustrating and slowing my enjoyment a bit.

A few editing issues, some word choice issues, repetative thoughts/lines, and too formal/sophisticated dialogue for a 1% MC.

Really like Rayna/Daisy and Fury. Cute slighly dark/heavy story. Enjoying it.