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Delta
is 50% done
I really tried... DNQ at 50%. Stilted dialogue... repetition ad nausea of the self-deluding insecurity of the heroine and denial of his feelings by the hero.
— Oct 20, 2017 05:41AM
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Anne
is 18% done
It's so lovely how the spelling of the heroine changes from paragraph to paragraph. What great editing.
— Jul 27, 2014 04:17PM
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Wyrdness
is 29% done
Considering I'm nearly a third of the way through and there's been no sex this book is significantly more porny than I was expecting.
Also for the note of erotic authors, equating a vagina with a watering mouth is not sexy or hot and leads to uncomfortable thoughts of vagina dentata. Just an FYI for you.
— Mar 10, 2014 06:01PM
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Also for the note of erotic authors, equating a vagina with a watering mouth is not sexy or hot and leads to uncomfortable thoughts of vagina dentata. Just an FYI for you.





