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Trip
Trip is 8% done
I'm dnf. Just not feeling these characters at all or the writing style, also not liking somethings I'm expecting and confirmed by checking a couple of reviews so nope. I like the concept but that's about it...
Apr 06, 2020 02:03PM Add a comment
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Melissa
Melissa is 30% done
Hmm, the writing is still ok but it doesn't flow well from person to person, thought to thought, or scene to scene. And there is a lot of winking which is getting annoying. Especially since said "winker" is "straight." That really bugs me.
Aug 16, 2016 09:22AM Add a comment
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Melissa
Melissa is 11% done
The writing itself is fine. I am not sure I like the characters yet. It's still early so time will tell.
Aug 15, 2016 05:17AM Add a comment
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