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Holy shit! That should have a trigger warning! Despite the fact that I feel no connection with this guy a main character being suicidal should have a trigger warning!!

WTF?! Now they're going to the concert that was supposed to have been their first date?! Really, really needs an editor! *sigh*

WTH?! Apparently a semi significant time jump..."Lately, Jake had been staying over at least a couple of days a week.".... Seriously?! SMH...

Say what?! He's on his supper break! Yet now he's spending the night??? Damn this needs an editor.

Damn! I was already thinking that there's too much focus on everything BUT a romance! Now it's fade to black?! Ugh!

This needs an editor.... he closes at noon... walks next door and a few minutes later leaves, going out into "the cold night air"?! Uh I'm sorry but it's not night a little afternoon. SMH...

If you're going to use a word that I have to look up the definition if you should at least spell it correctly. SMH...

Ugh, huge blocks of info dump, and this is the third book in the series! I like the characters, but I have been skimming for a long time. I'm not the biggest critic of "show don't tell" but this book needs a LOT more showing.