Status Updates From Prototype Exodus (Prototype...

almost done, and not looking forward to having to wait for the next book.
it seems this one may be a bit more of a cliffhanger..

Still good.. but I now see what reviewers were saying about repettitiveness. It also seems to have too much stream of consciousness going on and not enough action or dialogue.

I see issues already with logic and story crafting.
1) Des is so angry his friends died.. yet we are never shown his relationship with them in order to sympathize with Des.
2) I'm still pissed Des left for 5 yrs & didn't once think about Hazel. He's supposed to have human emotions..he loves her.. wtf?
3) What has Hazel been doing for 5 years?

I hope these matters will get explained or I this may end up a dnf

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igual de bueno que el primero. Y solo cuesta 2.99

“I might have been built to kill, but I can choose not to.”---the quotes! So many awesome quotes!!

Gah!!! I'm 90% through this book and I can't stop reading!! It can't end at this point with a resolute ending!

Too many good quotes that won't fit in this box. lol. Just trust me. They're good.

Those with nothing to lose have the most strength.--so many quotable things!!

Seriously just got chills. But no spoilers!!

Each of them also started scratching away at his shoulder plates. Gone were the numbers that identified them. The black letters and numbers were now scratches and dents. And they started giving each other names.--I love this. Gosh. So many good lines!!!

“You gave me legs,” Esroy said, “but they could not run. You gave me eyes, but they could not see clearly. You gave me hands, but I could feel nothing. A face with no expression. All I have ever wanted was a functioning body and you never truly gave it to me.--DAAAAAAANNGGG!!!!!!!

And all that feels like a lazy description.

“Sometimes it’s not up to us, the positions we find ourselves in,” Nolan had told her. “Sometimes things happen because of what others see in us and not what we see in ourselves.”---profound writing.

Can I ugly cry about now?!

Kinda disappointed in Hazel and Nolan's romance.

“That’s right. In the update I want all the robots to see Des as evil. I want them to think about him and feel angry when they do. I want them to hate Des and everything he stands for.”--shit just got real!