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Kiara
is 83% done
LITERALLY missing words in sentences! This is such a peeve. How does this get past the author AND editors? Or maybe it didn't even have an editor and that's why it's like this idk.
— Jul 11, 2016 09:14AM
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Kiara
is 79% done
For the first time, I'm starting to wonder if her name is Day-juh or De-ay-shuh like I assumed from the start lol. I've only seen one spelled De'Ja and the other spelled Deasia... so it's inbetween and.... oh my gosh this is gonna bug me
— Jul 11, 2016 08:41AM
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Kiara
is 72% done
Oh my goodness there are so many errors in this book!!! It's ridiculous! Name slip-ups, spelling errors, grammar errors. The chapter is literally named in the wrong person's pov. Never have I ever read a book with so many errors. If I have read a book with errors, they weren't big or enough to catch my attention. But THIS? This is ridiculous.
— Jul 11, 2016 07:41AM
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Kiara
is 60% done
THIS. IS. SO. GOOD. BC. IT's. SO. REALISTIC. Like I ship them so hard so it's sad, but it's also just the reality. The black and white differences. The ignorance. All the reasons why something like this wouldn't always work. "You can leave now because I can't [mess] with ignorant people." BLESS. My heart breaks that he's ignorant but rejoices bc she's taking a stand on your beliefs. what she's really always done.
— Jul 11, 2016 06:54AM
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Kiara
is 46% done
The book has a lot of random, unnecessary swearing but what's really just annoying is how often they say 'Goddamn'.... like it has to no joke have been on each page at least once. It's just annoying and repetitive.
— Jul 11, 2016 05:54AM
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Kiara
is 23% done
A lot of name mix-ups in this story... something so simple you'd think an editor could catch.
— Jul 11, 2016 04:34AM
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Kiara
is 16% done
With the exception of the frequent swearing (will be able to look past most likely) I am loving this so far. Very realistic. Very educating. Great.
— Jul 10, 2016 10:31PM
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Gisele Walko
is 77% done
I hate Ryans mom. Feel bad for DAsia and Ryan.
— Jan 15, 2016 07:38PM
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Gisele Walko
is 62% done
I am completely engaged. Hope they can make it work!
— Jan 15, 2016 04:36PM
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