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Mike
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This is really bad. It's aggressively cliched, the writing is awkward and completely unable to sustain a tone, the sci-fi concepts are boring and barely even described, and the characters are too one-note to get invested in them. I've read worse indie books - it's at least not egregiously incompetent, and it doesn't make me angry at all. But I really can't think of anything this book has going for it.
— May 24, 2018 11:39AM
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