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The Star Host (Broken Moon, #1)
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F.T. Lukens (Goodreads Author)

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Barbara is on page 186 of 258

— Aug 12, 2018 03:42AM Add a comment

cloud is 50% done

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Jess Crafts is 48% done

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Jess Crafts is 48% done

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Sara is on page 179 of 258

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Annabella is on page 202 of 258

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Annabella is on page 174 of 258

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Annabella is on page 153 of 258

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Annabella is on page 140 of 258

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Annabella is on page 128 of 258

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Annabella is on page 128 of 258

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Annabella is on page 119 of 258

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Annabella is on page 70 of 258

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Annabella is on page 50 of 258

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Annabella is on page 37 of 258

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Emily is 48% done

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Samantha is on page 152 of 258

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Samantha is on page 97 of 258

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Samantha is on page 70 of 258

— May 30, 2018 09:07PM Add a comment

Mike is on page 30 of 258

This is really bad. It's aggressively cliched, the writing is awkward and completely unable to sustain a tone, the sci-fi concepts are boring and barely even described, and the characters are too one-note to get invested in them. I've read worse indie books - it's at least not egregiously incompetent, and it doesn't make me angry at all. But I really can't think of anything this book has going for it.

— May 24, 2018 11:39AM Add a comment