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His cock leaked like an adolescent boy finding his first Playboy as he listened to her breathing catch and deepen with each grind of his hips.

Say what? Why would you want your readers to imagine that?

Struggling a little with this one. It's a little too much Jordan Silverish for me right now....plus it's dragging....

I never knew there was an attempted child molestation in this book. This is huge for me here. WFT!? This better be it! I can't Handle another trigger here!!!

Yeah, what a violent psycho ! Please call in some other novel's hero to rescue this girl.

Yeap, this guy is a violent, selfish drama queen... I will have to power read through the rest.

Well, too much unnecessary intensity and violence, maybe this girl should run the other way...

From the beginning, I've been on the fence about DNFing this, but something kept hooked. Now it's just getting ridiculous and I'm starting to teeter the othe way back to a DNF.

Horribly written

And this is where I quit. The purple prose is killing me and trying to wade through it to find the story has become too laborious.

Well that was hot!