Status Updates From Burn (Dark in You, #1)

This was fun. Until it wasn’t. Mc and ml started pissing me off half way thru the book. And the soap opera fight scenes were cringe and boring. But overall pretty solid. 3.5 rounded down

Omg all this commentary during a climax scene is pissing me off

I hate the stupid ass picking up fml like she’s a child. Omlll why does author keep treating mc like a child.

LMFAOOOOOOOOO
NOT THE VILLAIN MONOLOGUE

OMGGG FINALLYYYY I LOVE THAT FML’S DEMON FINALLY BRANDED HIM

I wish Mc would initiate sex sometime. This whole independent fml thing? Yah I’m not seeing

Omg. The voice actor keeps giving Mc a whiny baby voice. Bro

LMFAOOO Archdemon is so anticlimactic

Mc says a lot of things about herself and does the exact opposite.

I don’t blame Carla for aborting the child she didn’t want and wouldn’t care for. But I do blame her for planning to rub it into Lucian’s face

Ngl I like the public sex. I just wish ml wasn’t always in control. The power dynamic feels very one sided. I want fml to do something about it.

I want fml’s demon to mark Knox the same way his demon keeps marking her. Then it would be fair.

Bro just ban Royce the same way he banned u

This voice actor makes everyone sound like a frickin child omfg

Expected a bit more frome mating tbh

Damn, he's getting sappy

Time for a re-read!!!