Status Updates From Serve & Protect (D.C. Files...

““Republicans make themselves look like idiots, and that’s to our advantage.” Greg nodded. “We’ll have the presidential nominee on Saturday while they’ll keep fighting for another two weeks. Democrats show unity, Republicans chaos and dirty tactics. Have you seen that ad that Thompson’s team made about McDouglas?””

Author’s political lean obvious. Totally not needed in the story.

This mess has to stop!

“Then the door opened and there they was—”

There they WAS?????

And again...

“It was after Sam finished his second toast <——-

“his second piece of toast” would be correct.

Located two paragraphs from the other. There are grammatical mistakes on every page like this and it’s distracting.

If grammar mistakes like this keep happening, it’ll knock a star of the final review:

“And as he sat there at the kitchen table and watched barely-dressed Blake making them toasts <——-

It’s “make them toast...”

You know, I've forgotten what Blake does for a living. SMH... damn shitty memory.

Typos, annoying typos.

It feels like I've read this before but never even heard of this before this book was offered for free.

Umm I wonder if it's me or Olivia did behaved younger than her age?? /totally NOT an expert on kid/

Only a trial basis? Really? Silly boys. You're in luuuuuuurve - embrace it and move in together already!

And now there's a Sammy as well as a Sam. This is just getting ridiculous.

This time, both a presidential candidate and one of Blake's coworkers are both named Martinez. Seriously. SO. MANY. NAMES. IN. THE. WORLD. Whyyyyyy?!

Ack! There's roughly a gagillion names in the world, why'd this author choose to name a kid's stuffed animal AND a character by the same name?

So far, so good. I REALLY like these two as a couple - the slide together may have been too easy so far, but they just fit for me.

Oh, wow, I am really loving this so far. I love how both men are quite mature in approaching this early stage of the relationship! With being upfront about the demand of their work and the background of one's family.

OK, this is a series but I hope the next book is a sequel! It was really, really good and so much still needs to he seen! Review shortly.

Blake put on the condom and entered him, slowly, so slowly it almost made Sam choke. He tried to push back, but Blake’s hands on his hips kept him still. They looked at each other the whole time, until Blake was as deep as he could go. He pulled out a little and slipped back in and Sam had to close his eyes.

*dreamy sigh*

Still loving this book, but things are pretty intense right now and I feel a bit plot twist coming on... *bites nails*