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Aerulan
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"Mentally, Kelen flinched at the man's blatant refusal to no longer acknowledge Kyber as his commander."
???? Is that sentence supposed to make sense? The guy it referenced just had his own little mutiny but I'm pretty sure that is never going to be a good way to describe it.
— Aug 23, 2015 09:59PM
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???? Is that sentence supposed to make sense? The guy it referenced just had his own little mutiny but I'm pretty sure that is never going to be a good way to describe it.
Aerulan
is 31% done
Seeing a lot of 'I used spellcheck instead of proofreading' errors. Gate for gait, aide for aid. Either Mooney is really bad at choosing the correct homonym or this was really lazily edited. Or both, actually.
— Aug 23, 2015 05:51PM
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