Status Updates From Missing Pieces

Maybe when love is the unstoppable force, there is no object it can’t move.

I thought we'd been over this. The two can't exist at the same time, and if it did, it'd be a black hole that would swallow the entire universe. In conclusion, no, I do not like this romance.

You've got to be kidding me. We're doing the potagonist runs in on wedding to break it off because she/he should be with him/her cliché?

Every single time this story has a chance to turn interesting it goes downhill with its decision to hang onto predictability. Like, a terrible city where outlaws live must be terrible because the strict government says so. Does it turn out to be a terrible place? nooooooooooooo, because then our protagonists wouldn't have any chance of running away.

She sits cross-legged on a bench in the back of the station, with sunglasses over her eyes and a black wool hat—completely wrong for the summer—hiding her distinguishable curly hair. It’s a strong disguise,

You think a hat--that's "completely wrong"-- is a good disguise? Excuse me while I laugh at your stupidity.

“Lara’s a big bitch, though,” she says. “Going to her cousin’s wedding over mine.”