Status Updates From Crowntide (edición en españ...

“His hair was dark as ink; his skin was pale as bone.” What is this 😂😂😂 why are we doing double similes for one sentence just to describe a man. Let’s try “ his hair was the exact shade of ink” and “their skin was bone pale” ????

The writing from Oro and Grim’s perspectives feels weaker. Every few pages they’re declaring how much they love Isla or giving grand speeches about how amazing she is. It feels inauthentic and not how men actually talk. Because their thoughts revolve entirely around her, they come across as one-dimensional—more like accessories to the FMC than fully developed MMCs. I fear the 1st book may be the strongest