Status Updates From Homeward for a Spell

I critique that I have to make so far is that the chapters are too long and sometimes there's too much exposition. also, everytime sage and araphi are close to each other, they mostly think about the other's exterior and how much they want to jump each other's bones. yawn

lungi da me dal prendere in giro araphi ma me par a' sor ra fess

Bard magic... cool bc it's the first time I see it in a book
tho you know who I think about when you say bard all the time (not Shakespeare lol)