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⭐️⭐️ for the story, 0 spice
This is a story about adults rebuilding after past relationships and a reminder that love comes when it’s least expected.
So far it lacks enough character development for me to feel invested, and the dialogue is unnatural. For example in conversation Brie asks about Kaleb’s past occupation and his response is “Correct.” A more appropriate response would be “yeah”.
— Feb 01, 2026 05:23AM
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This is a story about adults rebuilding after past relationships and a reminder that love comes when it’s least expected.
So far it lacks enough character development for me to feel invested, and the dialogue is unnatural. For example in conversation Brie asks about Kaleb’s past occupation and his response is “Correct.” A more appropriate response would be “yeah”.
