Status Updates From This Book Made Me Think of You

"Sometimes, life calls for a pillow fort. And sometimes you just have to build that fort yourself."
okay yeah this is gonna hurt lmao

Make it less jarring

I do wish that, when they do a flashback of her and Joe together when he's alive, there would be something to indicate it other than Joe being in the present tense. This is bc POV changes are done the same exact way: a break in the text, and an entirely new paragraph with a lead-in. Maybe if the flashbacks were in past tense, that would be better.

Just started and does anyone remember the movie P.S. I Love You?!? Because this book totally reminds me of that movie so far

Ok, I don't think it's weird that she's not ready to get rid of some of her dead husband's things. It's only been 6 months! However, her talking to the urn isn't healthy

typo run-on