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Dialogue and transitions occasionally feel a little awkward. Does the heroine have a personality? Also, I wished they would have aged her up. There is a significant enough age difference that reading about the hero reminiscing about liking a 16 y/o girl feels uncomfortable.

Eh, pretty typical story. I feel like the characters were from previous books that I've not read. Not really sure how I feel about either the hero or heroine. Didn't really connect with them but I was slightly intrigued by the plot because apparently main hero has a brother who looks just like him but was kidnapped when he was young and is now a criminal. HUH. Interesting.

nth kenapa awal crita bk ini sedikit aneh mntr aku, tau-tau si vinscoutnya lg tergantung-gantung di dpn jendela kamar seorg duchess, mrk mau melakukan affair atau gmn, gak bgtu jelas, trus stlh diselamatkan lg sama si duchess aka masuk balik ke kamar si duchess, trus dia ngeliat lbh jelas penampilan si duchess memutuskan kabur tanpa melakukan apa2, aka minat hilang. hem..