Status Updates From Pretty Girl

This book needs editing really badly. The errors are atrocious!

I'm too jaded to enjoy this book. The writing sounds so whiny and pretentious.

Wishing something would actually Halen in this book. I can't read any more of this tonight.

This author's writing style is really irritating me. It feels like she never grew out of the introspective high school creative writing "Oh god why am I here" style. Less talking. More action. Move the plot forward and teenagers don't talk like that.

"Our lives are frittered away by detail...simplify...simplify" - Th


This isn't updating from my phone so I apologize if this is a double or triple post.

Sorry but 6' tall is not a "large stature". To me, that's average at best.

I dont even know what to say. Just... wow.

W-what? God, no! ㅠㅠ

I've been trying and trying and trying. but I just can't finish this book. It seems too pretentious and I can't connect with the characters or the book

Ugh whenever Mason calls her "pretty girl" (which is annoyingly QUITE A LOT) , He sounds like a pervert -.- Please stopppp *cringes*

Ughhh Mason is getting on my nerves

Now where have I seen this scene before... Oh right. In like a million other cliched YA books. Hope it leaves a mark in originality..

I seriously cannot put this book down.