Status Updates From Better Than Revenge

It’s so cute!!

I want to like West’s books but they usually end up being not that great. The writing was distracting for me because it was so robotic & unemotional which led to a lack of connection. The characters didn’t have depth, the family was unrealistic, some of the plot was unrealistic, I wasn’t feeling the side story with the grandma. Her& Theo had some cute moments and I like their HEA at the end; best parts of the book.

Its cute

Her & Theo have had some cute moments. Idl the side plot about her grandma; it’s not emotional & the podcast growth & search for something in her past is unfolding very unrealistically. That will most definitely have a too-perfect ending. Subjects are heavy but there’s no emotion in this. Hoping her ex actually gets his comeuppance too.

1-12.pg98. I just started this late this evening so I’m surprised I got this far! The writing has a robotic quality, devoid of emotion. It makes it hard to connect or feel personality or humor. I’m for revenge, not all of their ideas, but trying out for football seems very far fetched.

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