Status Updates From Deviant (The Brethren Lords...

Idk how i feel about

Ok I got just over half way through. It got boring and tedious and, honestly, the spelling and grammatical errors are just too much. Going onto the DNF pile

I’m honestly on the verge of DNFing this one. Not because of the content - I mean, it comes with three pages of TWs so I knew it was going to be dark. And it is. But it’s littered with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. The use of ‘breech’ instead of ‘breach.’ And even though it’s a book set in the UK written by a UK author, there’s too many Americanisms. Cars here have boots, not trunks.

“I needed him, I love him, and yet I despise everything about him all the same.”