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“You’re actually in love with Connor?” He looks confused. “Even though he’s Irish?” im fucking crying arent you italian not too much now. this entire book feels like we're playing crimes against the two historically oppressed whites

i skipped two pages and suddenly the next chapter hes naked and theyre abt to fuck now hold awn a minute what the hell did i miss. also this book is realllllyyyyy teetering the line between fun bad and hard to read bad

‘We had stories spread about Paolo and Connor.’ But the chapter is from Paolo’s POV! Why is he referring to himself in third person? And even if it was from the only other POV in the novel, Connor’s, that sentence still wouldn’t make a lick of sense.

This has not been proofread, has it? Most egregious is that I’ve seen the baby’s name spelled correctly only once in 61 pages! :(