Status Updates From Heart of Fire

Now she's so angry she had to retrieve her temper.

"Looking at the clock on the wall, three hours had passed since she first arrived and the more impatient she became the harder it was to retrieve her anger."

Not sure what word was supposed to be used instead of "retrieve" since she was pretty angry...

This is painful.

Honestly this book is terrible so far. I hope it gets better but I can't see much hope in that.

It reads like a first draft - undeveloped characters, so many typos, misused words, missing words, added words, and cliches that it's not even funny.

and loving it!