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Sukriti Srivastava
is 93% done
Swallowing the Sun feels unnecessarily long and stretched, with repetitive death plots that lessen its emotional impact. Characters like Arjun and Govind are barely discussed, despite their potential. Although Malati and Kamala are introduced as strong figures, the narrative ultimately focuses only on Malati, leaving the rest underexplored.The novel has potential, but uneven focus and pacing hold it back.
— Jan 14, 2026 09:47AM
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Supeksha Agarwal
is on page 208 of 421
Lot of unnecessary description. Seems like the author wanted to flaunt all the knowledge of different languages, literature and history she has in this one book itself. Veryyyyy slow. Unnecessary usage of difficult and old language.
Only pro being short chapters!!
— Aug 14, 2025 03:12AM
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Only pro being short chapters!!





