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Ok I’m done…I am really disappointed because I’ve liked a couple of books this author wrote but this one feels off. Did you use AI?

There are a lot of inconsistencies in this book. Also, the vocabulary used feels out of place.

I think I’m going to end up DNFing this book. It’s already showing inconsistencies. One day she’s looking up Grayson online and deciding he’s not for her and she’s going to lose his number and then the next chapter he says let’s go on a date and she’s like, “ok!”